Yeah, that’ll help.
Impressions:
Ten minutes. Ten minutes in between Jogamine getting half her face gouged out and the fight with the rando that showed up to start. They spent ten minutes, standing there chatting, with the jank-ass CGI frogs trundling around in the background, getting sliced up by the other two girls. Can we pick up the pace ever so slightly? Do you understand how long ten minutes is? And this is with the ‘fights’ already getting time dilated by constant internal narrations to overexplain what’s going on while everything devolved into stills. Play as dramatic music as you want. It’s stills. Stills with a dude whose power is that he can see people’s levels.
All this leading up to… just sucker punching the guy with a knife? Dude sure went down unceremoniously for all the rambling. The ten goddamned minutes of rambling. And status screens. Goddamned status screens. He got bisected by… that one still? Come on. At least make it look slightly believable. You’re only drawing about two frames anyway. Everything here was so unfathomably dumb.
Next Episode:
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